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Non Lasciarmi Sola

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watercolors on paper
cm 38x38

thanks to :icondevadevil: for the reference
Image size
5906x5906px 12.82 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This piece is stunning. I love the colors, the waves of her hair, and the folds of the fabric. The lines are pleasing, and the way she catches the light is just wonderful. Even her face is practically perfect. I have only a few things to critique on: for one, the tears should really stop at her chin. It would have made the same impact without breaking up the light focus on her bare shoulder. Where the fabric is concerned, while I love the design, the coloration and shading of the folds is so lovely that the design actually takes away from your technique. Last, perhaps you were using a hand model or perhaps not. Her hand looks as if you just got tired of drawing. It could be that her hand is just in an awkward position in which case I would generally say show the whole hand so that viewers can visualize why it is in an abnormal shape. Please do not think this critique means that I do not love this piece. It is amazing! I just wanted to offer help so you will improve on your next lovely piece. Thank you!